Easter Saturday more PROVISIONAL folio comments

JN
Need shops research page with comments
As above for rough drawings
NEED CAD evidence - I will help here but you must make an effort to finish shop model
Lithography unfinished
Evaluation weak
Provisional folio grade D could be grade C possibly B

MRbt
CRF to complete
Stand drawing needs work in rough drawings section
Lithography and RISK Asseement to finish
Planning of making weak
C grade at present should be B if work above is addressed.

AS
Terribly disappointing effort
Research - only one weak page, need evidence of MP3 players, MP3 point of sale boxes etc.
SPECification virtually transparent
Rough drawings missing
No flow diagram
Evaluation superficial
Risk assessment and lithography pages missing
This results in a folio which is only grade E at present.
( model will lift grade but there is work to do )

MR
Need photoshop evidence and final magazine cover.

JD
All complete
grade A for folio

MB
Final spec to complete
No CAD of shop
No pictures of shops in research.
Folio at present is a low D which reflects the fact the folio got weaker as it progressed after some good initial work.

AR
Folio is a low grade A
Not as tight as it could have been.